On this page
- Name the broken part before you choose a route
- The six routes, with the real downside of each
- What each route costs in your own hours
- The Leftover Test, or what you still own when the money is gone
- Match the route to the sentence that describes you
- The do-it-yourself route, done properly, in one afternoon
- Where each route quietly fails
- The spend rule, and when an afternoon beats a fee
Choose the route by what is broken, not by what you can afford. If the claim is wrong, buy an hour of argument with someone senior. If the claim is right and the sentences bury it, draft it yourself against a checklist and edit hard. If the page keeps drifting out of date, you have a maintenance problem, and no one-off rewrite fixes that.
Name the broken part before you choose a route
A profile fails in one of three places, and the six routes below only separate cleanly once you know which one. The claim can be wrong, which means the page accurately describes work you no longer want to be hired for. The words can be weak, which means the claim is right and the sentences bury it under job history. Or the maintenance has stopped, which means the page was correct eighteen months ago and has drifted quietly ever since.
Most people buy for the second problem while holding the first. That is why a rewrite so often lands as a disappointment. The prose improves, the paragraphs get shorter, and a reader still cannot say what you sell or to whom. Better sentences do not settle an unsettled claim, they present it more confidently.
Two of the six routes below point at named services, Supersonify and Personeur. Both are run by the same team as this site, so they are sister services rather than neutral picks, and you should weigh that as you read them. They appear because they are the two routes we can describe accurately without guessing, and inventing details about companies we cannot verify would be a worse kind of dishonesty. Neither of them sits at the top of the list, because for most people reading this, neither of them is the right answer.
The stakes are worth an afternoon of attention. LinkedIn reports 1.3 billion members, and Statista puts usage at 87% of B2B marketers, so this page is what a buyer opens after your name comes up in a meeting you were not invited to. It is read in a hurry, on a phone, by someone deciding whether to reply to you.
The six routes, with the real downside of each
These are ordered by how many readers they genuinely suit, not by price and not by what earns anyone money. The first route is free, which is not modesty, it is arithmetic. The input most people are missing costs nothing to supply and cannot be bought from anyone else.
You fix the page in two sittings, working from a written order of operations rather than from inspiration. The claim gets settled first, the About opening second, the headline last.
A general purpose model produces three or four passable openings from your own raw material, and you cut and rewrite from there rather than from a blank page.
You pay a senior specialist for a single conversation about what you should be claiming, take the notes away, and do the writing yourself afterwards.
A one-off engagement with an individual writer who interviews you, drafts the page and hands it over. The commonest paid route and the widest quality range.
A continuing production arrangement in which a studio captures how you actually talk and then writes your LinkedIn presence on an ongoing cadence. The profile is fixed as part of that, not as a standalone job.
A team level engagement covering ads, the company page, employee advocacy and pipeline reporting. Individual profiles get fixed inside that programme because inconsistent employee profiles undercut everything else.
Read those six entries again and count how many of them require you to settle the claim yourself. Five. Only the fourth and fifth routes will do that thinking with you, and both of them will still ask you to defend the answer. The decision cannot be outsourced, only argued with, and that is the single most useful fact on this page.
What each route costs in your own hours
Money is the visible cost and hours are the hidden one. Every paid route still takes your time, because no writer can produce a profile without access to what you know, and the routes that promise otherwise are the ones that produce generic pages.
| Route | Your hours | Elapsed time | Money |
|---|---|---|---|
| Do it yourself against a checklist | 3 to 5 | Two sittings across two days | None |
| AI draft plus your own edit | 2 to 3 | One evening | A subscription you probably already have |
| One hour of positioning advice, then self-write | 4 to 5, including the call | One week, mostly waiting for the call | One senior hour |
| Freelance profile writer | 1.5 to 2 | Two to three weeks | A one-off fee with a very wide published range |
| Ghostwriting studio, ongoing | 4 to 6 in month one, then under an hour a week | Continuous | A recurring retainer |
| Company channel programme | Little from you personally, a lot from marketing | A quarter to see reporting | A programme budget |
The six routes on money, your hours and elapsed time. Your hours is the number people forget to count.
Now do the arithmetic in the open. Assume, purely as a stated assumption you should replace, that an hour of your working time is worth 100 dollars to your business. The do-it-yourself route at four hours costs 400 dollars that never appears on an invoice. The advice-then-self-write route costs the same four hours plus the fee, so it is not cheaper in hours at all. What it buys is a smaller number of wrong decisions made during those hours, which is a real purchase and a different one from writing.
Swap 100 for your own number and every row moves together, so the ranking barely changes. That is the useful part. The routes differ far more in hours than they do in rates, which means the honest comparison is a comparison of hours, and almost nobody publishes one.
The Leftover Test, or what you still own when the money is gone
Ask what survives the engagement. Two routes at the same price can leave you with completely different assets, and the difference only becomes visible a year later when your offer moves and the page has to move with it.
Scored this way, the free route usually beats several paid ones, because it leaves all five. The paid routes win on the artefact and on your calendar, which is a fair trade when your calendar is genuinely the constraint. It is not a fair trade when you simply do not want to make the decision, and that is worth being honest with yourself about before you buy anything.
- A profile breaks in one of three places, the claim, the words or the maintenance, and each break has a different cheapest fix.
- The route that suits most readers is the free one, because the input most people are short of is a decision rather than a writer.
- Comparing routes on price alone hides the real cost, which is the number of your own hours each route consumes before anything reaches the page.
- Ask what you still own after the money is spent, because a delivered file expires with your offer while a written reasoning document does not.
- Two of the six routes here are run by the same team as this site, and neither of them is the right answer for one person fixing one page in one afternoon.
Match the route to the sentence that describes you
Find the row you would say out loud to a friend. The route in the second column is the cheapest thing that actually addresses it, which is not always the cheapest thing on the list.
| If this is true of you | Take this route | Because |
|---|---|---|
| You can state who you help and what changes for them, and the page just reads badly | Do it yourself against a checklist | The expensive input is the decision, and you are already holding it |
| You changed what you sell in the last twelve months | One hour of positioning advice first | A rewrite of a stale claim is a tidier version of the wrong page |
| You have rewritten the About section four times and still dislike it | One hour of argument, not a fifth rewrite | The fourth draft is evidence that the problem sits underneath the prose |
| You write well for clients and freeze writing about yourself | AI draft plus a hard self-edit | The tool deletes the blank page, which is the only part you actually dislike |
| Your calendar is full and the claim is settled | A freelance profile writer | You are buying hours, not thinking, and you should say so in the brief |
| You intend to publish weekly for a year and will not write it | A ghostwriting studio | A recurring cost matches a recurring job, and the profile comes along with it |
| Twenty colleagues have profiles that contradict the company message | A company channel programme | This stopped being a profile problem and became a channel problem |
A decision table. Read the left column first and stop at the first row that is true.
The row people resist most is the third one. Paying for an hour of argument feels like paying for nothing, because no document arrives. It is usually the cheapest exit from a page that has been rewritten four times, and the pricing logic behind it is unpacked properly in what a profile rewrite costs.
The do-it-yourself route, done properly, in one afternoon
If the free route is the right one for most readers, it deserves the real method rather than a shrug. This is the order that produces a usable page in three to four hours, and the order matters more than any individual step.
Open the last three proposals you won and the last two you lost. Highlight the phrases the buyer used to describe their own problem. Those phrases are your source text, and they are almost never the phrases already on your profile, which tends to be written in the language of your employment history.
Write one sentence naming who you help and what changes for them, with no conjunctions and no category words like founders or businesses. If it takes forty five minutes, that is the job doing what it is supposed to do. If it takes ten, test it by reading it to someone who does not know your work and asking them what you sell.
The first two lines are the only part shown before a reader has to tap to expand, so those two lines carry the whole page. Start with the problem your buyer recognises, not with your years of experience. Experience answers a question nobody has asked yet.
Write it after the About section, because by then you know what you are claiming. Check how it looks truncated on a phone, where roughly the first forty characters do the work. LinkedIn people search reads the headline, so the words a buyer would actually type belong in it.
A page that persuades and then offers no next move converts interest into nothing. Add one action that is possible from the page itself, whether a booking link, a featured case study or a plain instruction to message you about a specific thing.
Read the page the next morning as if you were a buyer who has ten seconds and three other tabs open. Better still, send it to one person in your actual market and ask them a single question: what do you think I do, and who for.
That sequence totals about three hours and ten minutes of work, which is the low end of the estimate in the hours table. Add an hour for the pass most people need after the cold read, and the arithmetic holds. The ordered version of this, with the reasoning behind each position, is set out in a profile checklist ordered by impact.
Where each route quietly fails
Every route has a characteristic failure, and it is rarely the one advertised. Knowing the failure mode before you commit is worth more than knowing the price, because the failure is what you will actually be living with.
- Do it yourself fails on the outside read. You end up with a page you find accurate and a stranger finds unreadable, and there is no mechanism in the route that catches it unless you build one in.
- The AI route fails on specificity. Fluent output makes weak claims feel finished, and the draft quietly launders your vagueness into confident sentences that say nothing checkable.
- The one hour of advice fails on follow through. The notes are good, the writing never happens, and three months later the page is unchanged and you are annoyed about the fee.
- The freelance writer fails on the invisible inputs. When a quote gets squeezed, the interview and the positioning hour are what get cut, because their absence cannot be seen in the delivered file.
- The ghostwriting studio fails when the executive will not turn up. Voice capture needs your actual thinking, and a studio starved of it produces competent posts about nobody in particular.
- The company programme fails when it is bought to solve an individual problem. Channel reporting cannot tell you whether one person's headline is right, and paying for measurement you will not read is the most common form of overbuying.
Nobody controls LinkedIn's ranking or a buyer's attention, so a promised number of enquiries is a statement about a seller's confidence and not about your result. A guarantee worth having is procedural instead: a fixed number of revision rounds, a delivery date, and a defined point at which you get your money back if the first draft misses the brief.
The spend rule, and when an afternoon beats a fee
Spend money on the input you are actually short of and on nothing else. Almost every disappointing purchase in this category is someone who paid for drafting when their problem was the claim, or paid for strategy when the claim was settled and the sentences were merely clumsy.
- You can name your buyer as a job title, not as a category like founders, businesses or leaders.
- You can say what changes for that buyer after working with you, in one sentence, with no conjunctions.
- You have one piece of proof you are allowed to publish, whether a named result, a client logo or something public you made.
- You know whether the page is aimed at buyers or at employers, because a single profile does one of those two jobs properly.
- You know what a convinced reader should do next, and that action is possible without leaving the page.
If four of those five are settled, any paid route will go well and cost less, because you have already supplied the expensive input yourself. If fewer than three are settled, you are buying an argument, and you should buy it openly rather than hiding it inside a copywriting brief. What the page should do once it is fixed is a separate question, treated properly in turning the profile into a conversion step.
The question is never which route is best. It is which of the three breaks you actually have, and which route repairs that one without selling you the other two.The house position
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